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Liked it but..

There is a random high pitched noise that seems to happen every once and a while, and it is rather piercing...

Kreid responds:

Yeah I just noticed that, it's actually part of the BGM I think

THANK YOU!!

I laughed at the audio when i first heard it in the Audio Portal, and i'm still laughing now. My only real gripe would be that the music wasn't "Original" in the sense that you made it or that someone else made it here on newgrounds. But other then that it fit perfect. I would suggest bringing the volume down a smidge at the climax(s) of the song. Mainly to even things out, since it did get a little hard to hear the voice.

:3

RicePirate responds:

:3 I also was having an inner struggle about using O Fortuna, in fact, I went through the audio portal for remakes... there were a couple, but all techno (which I liked... but didn't fit the piece). DMac was epic, I needed epic music behind him :) (That said, go scout the Audio portal for awesome tunes! There are so many!)

Woo!

It's weren't to bad for a year old script. Though it does have it's issues here and there. You had a nice use of music (Trying not to sound biased since you did use my song lol), and the animation was pretty smooth for the most part, and will just need practice to get it better.

I think that you have a lot of potential to make some really great flashes, and hey you've already been apart of a flash that got front paged, so you've got exposure already, lucky you!!!

I would love to work with you again as far as providing musics go if you want. I mean that song didn't jump up in veiws or reviews, but it's still nice ya know? =3

OnionsXD responds:

Wow! Thanks for the extensive review! What I meant with indicating that it was a year old script was that NOW I can write so much better stuff. And I understand humor a lot better now!!

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Woot! This was fun workin with you guys :3

Not the best...

But has potential i suppose. The Music doesn't loop. And there should be some visual indicator of if the ball is moving, rather than just the platform moving under it. Also maybe some sore of level indicator as well. Just a general graphis overhaul would do this a great deal.

Tis Pretty good

My last review got removed due to a technical issue.

With the music, it is now muuuuuchly better :3

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It's always fun make these sort of goofy and fun tracks. Love the dissonant qualities of the instruments. Everything seems to flow along with each other nicely. Rhythmically it's also quite fun as well.

I guess the only thing i could think that might improve upon this would be to expand upon some of the ideas that you have throughout the piece, even if only a little

The feedback sound weirdly cuts away, might need some tweaking.

Little mixing here and there with the individual instruments to help bring them out will help too, but so far shit's damn good. Can't wait to hear it as you work/finish it :3

Bad-Man-Incorporated responds:

Cheers man. I'll take care of issues for the final version. This hasn't received my signature attention yet.. Just an idea. Thanks again, man!

What did you use to make this? The sounds are nice and clear, but the percussion seems a little out of it. And there is a bit of flat/emtyness at points.

Otherwise a rather nice little happy tune :3

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Ah cubicle dexter

How i loved your movie, so sad that your younger self had to go.

I like how you used the borderless style. Makes me think of some sort of Samurai Jack - Dexters Lab cross-over possibility :3

I like it actually, but heres some things....

That are good and that can be improved:

-Posture & Anatomy:
She looks like she is in a rather uncomfortable turned position of the head, and her shoulders look as though they might be a bit to far back for the way that she is turning, or rather bring her right arm around more to the front to give her a more "I'm running, aren't i cute" kind of look.

Her mouth looks a tad to high, and her jawline seems a bit to rounded, maybe add some small detail marks and shading to give the jaw a bit more depth.

Other than that the rest of the body looks pretty good overall.

-Background & Scenery:
The sky has a nice subtle but effective feel to it. The detail to the plants is actually quite nicely done. Maybe a touch of shading on the grass and the other plants around the grass. Also make it look as though it is flowing along with the (what appear to be) leaves flowing in the wind, by having the grass bend in a similar direction, but without making them look exactly the same.

The floating "leaves" look a bit to out of place as far as the detail goes, but would look nice with a bit more color and shade.

And well, the ground looks like it is either sand, or dirt, it is to hard to tell. Practice a bit more on ground styles cause along with the rest of what is a pretty good looking picture, it is a bit of a distraction rather than a nice detail.

Hopefully i wasn't to harsh on you, i actually really liked it, even with it's minor flaws! =3

OnionsXD responds:

OMG!! this is just about the most helpful review I've had! Thanks so much! I even see and notice all those minor flaws no and I even realized something else as well. those kinda big green leaves in the foreground WERE NOT supposed to be leaves or even green. They were flower petals and I shaded them and everything and somehow they turned all one shade of green and I never noticed!! Thanks for the review! these especially help!:DD

Hmmmm....

Well there are a few things i wonder about this:

1) Is the ship design inspired by starfox? Because it sounds an aweful like that to me.

2) What program are you using to get 3D effects?

And here are a few pointers:

1) There needs to be a bit more detail work in the wings. Give them more of a fly-able look.

2) Maybe smooth off the edges of it just ever so slightly, but don't make it look spherical(if this makes sense)

3) Use a bit more color overall.

4)More general detail. Give it some aesthetic charm.

Anyways it wasn't too bad. =3

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Kinsei responds:

Detail seems to be eveyones biggest issue with this model, so that is a sign that I need what? Yes, thats right. more detail.
Honestly I'm not mocking you on this, I just needed a creative starting line for my response. Although I joke around a lot, I take critique and reviews very seriously.
Ok back on track here

this ship wasn't inspired by Star Fox, It was just something I was playing around with when I was trying to come up with the cyberpunk stage.

For my 3D I tend to use 3DsMax, Maya, and Zbrush, or a mix of all 3.

I'll get some more color and detail in there I promise. :P
thanks for the review and 7 it'll come in handy later when I use my 3D models to RULE THE WORLD!!!!!!!!!
>.>.....

A giant lovable teddy bear here to hugs kittens. =3 FEAR MY "=3" face!!!!!!

Kris Brown @Kirbyfemur

Age 33, Male

Rogue Community College

Grants Pass/Oregon

Joined on 12/18/07

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