Kirbyfemur's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Celest's Got a Sword]

Not to bad

Good shading where it is used. Decent proportions. Nice sword design.

But for all of the detail put into the shirt and pants, it seems to be missing in other places.

The arms and fingers could use some more defining in the curves, the neck could use some too.

And i know how hard shoes can be to draw, so i wont be too harsh, so i'll just say, keep practicing on the shoes till you get them how you want them. =3

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CelestOrion responds:

Thanks for the response! I'll admit, hands and fingers are my worst enemy. I'm surprised I even made them look like that in the pic. I'll also take note on the clothing, and see what I can do there.

[Stoned Jesus]

Tis okay

It's an attempt to be funny, could be seen as offensive to some of the religious people or something but eh, wont bash you for it.

So here are my nit picks.

I know hair is one of the harder things to make on a person, but it could use some work. Some shading and more defined curves would help it a lot. But it would seem, as the others may have pointed out, that shading should be a focus as you are making more art. Sometimes a good shade could make all the difference in a piece of art.

And i guess my final thing would be more colors i guess. Don't be discouraged by our harsh words, learn from them, grow from them, and you'll do just fine. =3

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[Jason VS Barney]

Finally someone who understands!

I'm glad to see i'm not the only one who thinks he i pure evil. I think he's the child of a spawn of satan, or some really bad guy like that. lol =3