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Kirbyfemur

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Pretty good

Has that war type of feeling, like something bad has just happened, and the view goes into the soldiers Point of view, and he pans the scenery at the horror. The only sound we would hear would be the music, like an explosion had just gone off in the persons ear, and he is watching a horrific ting happening all around him. And right before the song ends he is snapped back into reality, before the real battle starts.

Eh sorry if that's not helpful, but that's what i pictured hearing this. Sounds great. =3

Enzer0 responds:

Thanks! I can see exactly what you mean - Slow motion as things happen around with the sound fading as everything is chaos. Yea :D i like that.

Good

If you plan to do anything else with this, make sure you mess with the instrument sounds, so that you aren't just using to preset instrument sounds. Has decent structure, i'd like to hear maybe more variety, and like i said mess with the sounds and the eq's for a bit and find the right sound. Good start. =3

Tis alright

What i can say is make sure every sound is individualy eq'd. The guitars especially. If you plan to add more leingth, make sure you give it much more variety. Maybe a bass part. But otherwise it's a start =3

Jon1397 responds:

Thanks man!
Yeah, I was really lazy with the guitar, and I wanted to get rid of this song, so i didn't include a bass part.

~Jon~

Loops?

I could hear that some sort of looping was going on, but did you guys record the loops or did you use some other programs loops?

Pawner909 responds:

garage band we did like a b c type song.

Pretty

I can say this sounds like it would be a good song for some sort of short introduction or starting screen, or pause menu or something. Very subtle, sweet, and a relaxing experience. But just not quite enough substance for me to give it any better than a 9. But good job still =3

Twas okay

There where parts of the song that didn't seem quite together, and well just a bit off, and it doesn't help that there have been probably a bunch of covers of zelda medleys. But it wasn't bad. =3

Different but in a good way

I like the vocal delivery and about everything in this song.

A couple nit picky things though, the instruments seem either to quiet, or their eq's are set weird making it a bit hard to hear. I don't know. But liked it none the less. =3

Citrina responds:

Thanx. I wasn't very sure about the vocals, I've never realy done it for metal songs before

Hmmm....

Well i can say it was entertaining for a bit.

But the problem is this doesn't have enough consistency. I mean i'm the last person to say this, but the ideas that are going around don't really flow, they seem to spontaneous. The lyrics where soso, and the delivery was less than heart felt, but eh it was enough entertainment for me not to score it any lower than this. =3

hummel4trumpet responds:

Thanks for listening!

Hmmm....

Well if i where an ass i'd mark you down for the whole "Furry" thing. Lol

It's not that i hate people who look at stuff like that, it's just i don't know.

Anyways i liked the song, very relaxing, very peaceful =3

codbarley responds:

well, thanks for not being an ass about it :P

Haha wow

Gotta love the DBZ throw in xD

Well i like it, but the only real problem i found, is that the drum part reminds me too much of one of your other songs "Broken", it might just be the actual sound, but just the way it plays at certain parts it has a striking resemblance. Anyways good job. =3

NightWake responds:

I made this on the same day and I use the same kit pieces for both songs

Technically they are completely different songs
Realistically they sound exactly the same lol

This is meant to basically be a more "filled out" version of Broken
Alot of people didn't like how the riff was 'juttery' or how it didn't 'flow' well
This riff and drum line flow better

A giant lovable teddy bear here to hugs kittens. =3 FEAR MY "=3" face!!!!!!

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Rogue Community College

Grants Pass/Oregon

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