Kirbyfemur's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[[dj-Jo] Rave Discord {AP}]

Good build-up

I like that you progressively add instruments throughout the song.

It keeps from getting repetitive by making slight change ups to the melody.

as far as the overall sound, it works together well enough, even though those instrument sounds are kind of used to death in this genre of music lol

The drum "solo" at the end was nice, even if it was cut a little short for our previewing pleasure. Not to bad =3

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[Waaaar!]

I actually didn't hate the sound

While it'll a bit strange, and could use a little tweaking. I like the sound the piano gives it.

It has a good pace to it, I like the contrasting speeds of the piano and the drums. Slower piano, faster paced drums.

Once it loaded right on my computer it looped really nicely. Not to bad =3

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Centrist responds:

;D Thanks for the review.

[PureX (Final State)]

Maybe not dance?

I don't know much about electronic music, but but going off the name of the genre It doesn't have a consistent beat throughout. But it has enough interesting parts and melodies in it to keep it interesting.

Because of he rather long build up, maybe expand on the song a bit to give a more full feeling. Because it feels like it just ends too early.

Anyways, I like what you have going here. To me it does well to keep from getting repetitive.

Nice work.=3

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DavidRx responds:

hmm yea but i was trying to be basic whit dance...but all the ambience came up n it sounded good :D
so i dont know wich 1 i shud put it on :O
yea i was trying to be critical on the repetitive side so i wudent overstep it..but the intro is kinda steping over even so :S

thx =D

peace DrX

[My Heart Is For You }{Alix1}{]

Very pretty

I like what you've got going here. I like the fact that you don't just try to continuously have notes being played throughout, you allow there to be space in between the notes. It has enough goinging for it to help keep it from being too repetitive.

A few pointers. Maybe ad more dynamic levels, I feel that there seems t be only two distinct levels of volume in the song. It helps build tension in the song, and add more emotion to it.

Good work here though. =3

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alix1 responds:

Yay! :) thanks for the review :3 I wanted it to be a simple song that sorta transitions a bit throughout.

[Intercontinental]

Glad you don't use samples lol

It has a very intellectual feel to it. Like the lyrics to the song could and should written by a poet, but spoken in hip-hop form. It could be delivered calm, almost sung.

I like that it keeps a similar theme throughout, but has enough change-ups to help break up some of the monotony that can be caused by repeated sounds.

I would actually really like to hear this with some vocals, even if this genre type isn't my forte, this has actually peaked my interest. =3

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[(CHS) Death Match!!!]

Not to bad

It sounds like a lot of work was put into this song.

But I feel like the bass is slightly neglected, not the drum but the bass sounds in general. But that might have been done so that the song didn't have a bunch of crackles everywhere so i wont dock you to bad for that.

Good luck with some of the other songs you might be working on, might have to check them out. =3

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ChaosDragon004 responds:

Hey thanks alot. That really does mean alot. The bass does need some work and I did have some problems ballancing this one out lol. If I turned the base up the the rest of the instruments would drown out. So I was hit with a choice, I had to either chose the song or the base lol. Thanks again. Oh, and I would really appricaite it if you did let me know what you thought about my other songs.

[Whales [Box-Killa]]

Interesting

It helps the whole whales thing that you've added the wave effect in the background lol

I don't think that this song is all too weird, just has some strange accidentals thrown in everywhere.

Truly the biggest problem might be that it could maybe use some sort of change up, like a sub-melody somewhere in it. I don't know, it might be one of those instances where you know it could use some work, but don't know where to start at. Anyways nice little thing you've got going here.

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Box-Killa responds:

Lol, I yeah that wave thing gives it a nice atmosphere. I think it I added a sub melody, the song would become too complex and it would be more like an octopus, rather then a whale song :D

[Search your grave(1st Dra]

Glad to see something that isn't an electonic song

I mean as a featured song.
So here's my thought on how you could expand, and sorry if this sounds like someone elses idea, i haven't taken the time to read all of the reviews. lol

1.) Obviously longer
2.) Feels like it would lead to some sort of heavy breakdown near the end.
3.) Sounds like a perfect introduction song, or filler song before a main song, so maybe keep this, but add a song after i following similar chord sounds.
4.) Add some sort of low minor chord into the mix.

I don't know what else to say other than can't wait to hear the finished product. =3
This song deserves a better score than wat is shown.

Vote: 5 (3.85/5.00 +0.023)

[.everyone loves periods.]

Ambient?

A little repetitive, and don't know about the genre choice. But it's a nice little piece. Like the little change up in the end. With a little teaking this could be great. Just don't ask me what to tweak, i couldn't really tell you. But this song sounds like it should be in the misc. genre or maybe one of the electronic genres. I don't know, i kind of liked it anyways. =3

VegetarianMeat responds:

For me it was between miscellaneous and ambient, and I really don't like the misc. genre. I could put all of my songs into that genre and it would fit. Maybe it's not straight-up ambient, but I used some elements from it.

Yeah, the melody is repetitive, but I think there's enough changes in the song itself before it gets boring. It's also relatively short.

I'm not really sure what to say about the tweaking since you can't actually tell me what needs tweaking. Whatever, I like it the way it is. I'm glad you could get something out of it anyways.

Thanks for the review :)

[DJ Harlock // Struck n' Nerve]

Mmkays

I'm not a fan of this kind of music, but i'll give you some feedback on it.

It flows pretty well, even if the beat if the beat is the same as a great many of other songs as i've heard. Try something different maybe, use different beats, different sounds. Don't stick with the format that so many others seem to be following, and following religiously.

I don't know if it helps, but there's my two cents.