Kirbyfemur's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[MegaManWindMan-Metaljonus]

Gonna laugh if i see it on the front page lol

It wasn't to bad. But to explain the header, It's probably going to get a bunch of single line review saying something like "OH MA GAD TIS TEH SMEX!" or some shit because it's from a video game they've played.

Not trying to sound mean at all, i liked it, even if i haven't really played the games that much. =3

Metaljonus responds:

lol its all good dude, I would laugh too if it was on the FP but hey its a fun song non the less.

[Dainy Rays-Metaljonus]

None to bad =3

I like that you seem to try something different with this, i mean as far as from the other tracks i've heard of yours. I could try to add a bass part if you are still lookingfor it. PM me if you would want me to give her a go. I'm not the greatest thing out there, and i wont try to be, but i could give it a go.

Metaljonus responds:

go for it

[Turn the Page. Final Remix!]

Don't know about calling it a "Remix"

This really doesn't feel like a remix, it feels more like a song rewritten in Midi format.
Don't get me wrong, i love the song, but more could be done with it.
Good work, don't be discouraged by my mean old words, take then in stride and make something great for us to listen to =3

BassTwister responds:

thanks for the review. After my nothing else matters remake i just din't get it right. I will sure make something good :)

[=[ Azure Sky ]= WIP]

Not really into this music, but i'll try...

It reminded me of the game "Tetrissphere" from the nentendo64 for some reason, though that might just be the genre. But sounds pretty good. Has some interesting transitions. The mixing sounds pretty good so far, but it might just need a bit more variety, as far as what you do with the main theme. Not a bad start =3

[Corpse fucker]

Quality problems? lol

I might have given it a better score, but the vocal quality was at times to hard to hear because of the graininess. Maybe you're trying a little to hard to be funny? The lyrics seem a bit forced at times. It was funny for a while, but maybe instead of using a bunch of random profanity, fit those word better into the lyrics. Cussing is fine, just not when it seem like you're trying use a cuss word every other word lol

Work a bit evening out the sounds, like making sure the vocals don't sound forced in front of the rest of the instruments. And maybe work on how you sing it, like the timing of the words and stuff. Anyways, not terrible, just can't give you full props sowwy. But keep up the work you'll do just fine. =3

Hildebrandt responds:

Dude, two things:
a): I didn't put any effort in this piece of cock

b): PROFANITY IS DA SHIT!!!

thx for your review.

Shit.

Vaginas.

[Go (is the only instrument)]

lol

Well can't say I liked it completely. But it's kinda funny, and must have been fun to mess with. Boredumb at best =3

TheBackupCrew responds:

hey!
exactly what i would have said =3

[Closer (NIN cover)]

Good job

There are a few issues i had. This song was more about how the sound fits together (at least for me). The beat in the drums are meant to stand out a sort of "pop" in your face. There should have been more diversity in the guitar sounds so we could hear the individual build-up parts a bit easier. The vocals seemed a little forced, and like there trying really hard to be Marylin Manson, as well as trying not to sound like them. (It makes sense to me i don't know if it does to anyone else lol)

Really other than those issues, i liked it, was an interesting version of the song. =3

industrialplayground responds:

I understand what you mean but I wasnt trying to do the original version I wanted a more structured metal song. As for the Manson thing not trying to sound like him or not, that is just my natural voice.

[Brimming Fear]

Heavy Metal?

It's not that i don't like this song, but i don't really think it fits as heavy metal, more closely to classical, or one of the electronic genres. Liked it, though misgenred. Good job =3

jdh504 responds:

Yeah I'm not really sure what to put it in for these songs, electronic seems off cause most of these songs are mostly either string or piano, and I wouldn't classify this as classical, and everytime i put one of these songs in the misc. category nobody gives a shit about them, and since most of my other music is heavy metal I figured I would just put all these songs in the category, I guess they're heavy in their own respect, just not really heavy metal...ehh, I don't know, I just put most of my shit in heavy metal anyways lol....but thanks for the review, glad you liked the song!

[kickass lullaby]

Lullaby? o.o

Don't know about falling asleep to something like this, i'd think it'd give me nightmares xD anyways, not to bad here. =3

zcool888 responds:

haha! good one! thats why it's "kickass" though :P

anyways thanks a bunch for the review, I always love them.

I worked hard enough on this song (I know, I am super-n00b) and I am decently proud of it.

[Slayer Redifined]

Hmmm.....

Well it was interesting to hear, but i just can't really give you much props for some random noises. I bet you had fun with it. It sounds like a fun way to mess with a program, but just doesn't really work as a song/loop. Sowwy dude, but don't be discouraged, you can come up with something great, i know you can. =3

dondrummer responds:

Thats allright. This isnt a proper song. Just some FX. I wanted to show wat FL Slayer could do. :) its allright i'm not annoyed :)