Kirbyfemur's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[(CHS) Death Match!!!]

Not to bad

It sounds like a lot of work was put into this song.

But I feel like the bass is slightly neglected, not the drum but the bass sounds in general. But that might have been done so that the song didn't have a bunch of crackles everywhere so i wont dock you to bad for that.

Good luck with some of the other songs you might be working on, might have to check them out. =3

-Review Request Club

ChaosDragon004 responds:

Hey thanks alot. That really does mean alot. The bass does need some work and I did have some problems ballancing this one out lol. If I turned the base up the the rest of the instruments would drown out. So I was hit with a choice, I had to either chose the song or the base lol. Thanks again. Oh, and I would really appricaite it if you did let me know what you thought about my other songs.

[Whales [Box-Killa]]

Interesting

It helps the whole whales thing that you've added the wave effect in the background lol

I don't think that this song is all too weird, just has some strange accidentals thrown in everywhere.

Truly the biggest problem might be that it could maybe use some sort of change up, like a sub-melody somewhere in it. I don't know, it might be one of those instances where you know it could use some work, but don't know where to start at. Anyways nice little thing you've got going here.

-Review Request Club

Box-Killa responds:

Lol, I yeah that wave thing gives it a nice atmosphere. I think it I added a sub melody, the song would become too complex and it would be more like an octopus, rather then a whale song :D

[Search your grave(1st Dra]

Glad to see something that isn't an electonic song

I mean as a featured song.
So here's my thought on how you could expand, and sorry if this sounds like someone elses idea, i haven't taken the time to read all of the reviews. lol

1.) Obviously longer
2.) Feels like it would lead to some sort of heavy breakdown near the end.
3.) Sounds like a perfect introduction song, or filler song before a main song, so maybe keep this, but add a song after i following similar chord sounds.
4.) Add some sort of low minor chord into the mix.

I don't know what else to say other than can't wait to hear the finished product. =3
This song deserves a better score than wat is shown.

Vote: 5 (3.85/5.00 +0.023)

[.everyone loves periods.]

Ambient?

A little repetitive, and don't know about the genre choice. But it's a nice little piece. Like the little change up in the end. With a little teaking this could be great. Just don't ask me what to tweak, i couldn't really tell you. But this song sounds like it should be in the misc. genre or maybe one of the electronic genres. I don't know, i kind of liked it anyways. =3

VegetarianMeat responds:

For me it was between miscellaneous and ambient, and I really don't like the misc. genre. I could put all of my songs into that genre and it would fit. Maybe it's not straight-up ambient, but I used some elements from it.

Yeah, the melody is repetitive, but I think there's enough changes in the song itself before it gets boring. It's also relatively short.

I'm not really sure what to say about the tweaking since you can't actually tell me what needs tweaking. Whatever, I like it the way it is. I'm glad you could get something out of it anyways.

Thanks for the review :)

[MegaManWindMan-Metaljonus]

Gonna laugh if i see it on the front page lol

It wasn't to bad. But to explain the header, It's probably going to get a bunch of single line review saying something like "OH MA GAD TIS TEH SMEX!" or some shit because it's from a video game they've played.

Not trying to sound mean at all, i liked it, even if i haven't really played the games that much. =3

Metaljonus responds:

lol its all good dude, I would laugh too if it was on the FP but hey its a fun song non the less.

[Dainy Rays-Metaljonus]

None to bad =3

I like that you seem to try something different with this, i mean as far as from the other tracks i've heard of yours. I could try to add a bass part if you are still lookingfor it. PM me if you would want me to give her a go. I'm not the greatest thing out there, and i wont try to be, but i could give it a go.

Metaljonus responds:

go for it

[Turn the Page. Final Remix!]

Don't know about calling it a "Remix"

This really doesn't feel like a remix, it feels more like a song rewritten in Midi format.
Don't get me wrong, i love the song, but more could be done with it.
Good work, don't be discouraged by my mean old words, take then in stride and make something great for us to listen to =3

BassTwister responds:

thanks for the review. After my nothing else matters remake i just din't get it right. I will sure make something good :)

[Corpse fucker]

Quality problems? lol

I might have given it a better score, but the vocal quality was at times to hard to hear because of the graininess. Maybe you're trying a little to hard to be funny? The lyrics seem a bit forced at times. It was funny for a while, but maybe instead of using a bunch of random profanity, fit those word better into the lyrics. Cussing is fine, just not when it seem like you're trying use a cuss word every other word lol

Work a bit evening out the sounds, like making sure the vocals don't sound forced in front of the rest of the instruments. And maybe work on how you sing it, like the timing of the words and stuff. Anyways, not terrible, just can't give you full props sowwy. But keep up the work you'll do just fine. =3

Hildebrandt responds:

Dude, two things:
a): I didn't put any effort in this piece of cock

b): PROFANITY IS DA SHIT!!!

thx for your review.

Shit.

Vaginas.

[Go (is the only instrument)]

lol

Well can't say I liked it completely. But it's kinda funny, and must have been fun to mess with. Boredumb at best =3

TheBackupCrew responds:

hey!
exactly what i would have said =3

[Closer (NIN cover)]

Good job

There are a few issues i had. This song was more about how the sound fits together (at least for me). The beat in the drums are meant to stand out a sort of "pop" in your face. There should have been more diversity in the guitar sounds so we could hear the individual build-up parts a bit easier. The vocals seemed a little forced, and like there trying really hard to be Marylin Manson, as well as trying not to sound like them. (It makes sense to me i don't know if it does to anyone else lol)

Really other than those issues, i liked it, was an interesting version of the song. =3

industrialplayground responds:

I understand what you mean but I wasnt trying to do the original version I wanted a more structured metal song. As for the Manson thing not trying to sound like him or not, that is just my natural voice.