Kirbyfemur's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bubble Blitz]

Interesing

It's a good idea and a challenge.

Only a couple of thing that i can think of:

1) Since there seems to be very little difference in hitting a wall and a spiked area, i Would make it so the walls all have a slightly rougher looking edge to them to give them a more ominous look.

2) The pipes that blow air came into the game without real warning. That mght be something to mention. Or say that there are other things to look out for. I don't know.

3) I'm having some troubles with the difficulty of the challenge levels, but that might just be me lol

Anywho it isn't to bad. =3

-Review Request Club

MrRandomist responds:

OK thanks for the review!
ill keep those things in mind

[Valiance]

Really well built

Though there are some glitches throughout. Mostly with he moving platforms. I would see about fixing the whole fall through the platform thing. Also, since there is a limit to the amount of gravity changes, there means to be some sort of meter to show this. Maybe some kind of symbol that disappears as you use more and more.

Since there isn't really a story there's not much i can tell you. Oh and a little warning about the invisible platforms and buttons would be nice lol. The boss fight was surprisingly difficult. But because of the endless lives thing it wasn't that bad. Maybe make the hit detection a bit better 'cause i think the only way to be able to hit the boss is to be somewhat hit yourself. Oh and i'm only getting white screen after beating the game.

Anywho i hope this does well and that you fix it up, because it has a lot of potential! =3

[:The Dot Game:]

Few notes for ya! =)

Here are some problems i found in individual levels.

Level 5: you can just jump to the right straight into the portal.

Level 6: Similar to 5, but you can just jump left into the portal. But it may cause problems for the next level once it loads.

Level 7: If you had jumped left into the portal you might glitch through the floor and respawn fall. meaning, you'll go through the floor hit the part where it restarts you but you glitch through the floor still. Sometimes it will stop, but be careful. But there is also the problem where if you jump between some of the spikes, you'll fall through the floor.

Level 8: Don't understand both the steroid comment (ince it wouldn't realy make you jump very high) nor the whole fall through the floor thing if you do jump. It is especially bad when you jump buy the portal and fall through the floor, because you don't respawn.

Level 9: Lol, if you go right, and jump off the edge of "Pacman" you'll either fall forever, or just be transported to the next level.

Level 12: It would seem, at least for me that everytime it loads, you start out respawning.

Level 13: If for whatever reason you don't get into the portal at first, you can go off the left edge and fall forever.

Some of the glitches I found would probably only have been found if someone was being an idiot, or was searching for them, like me lol

Anyways, since there have been a couple of reviews of "Better are and other stuff shit" I thought i would try to give you something more. Hope it helps! =3

-Review Request Club

Joshsouza responds:

Yeah thanks, sorry for the library of bugs!

[Music Catch 2]

An idea, maybe?

You should get ahold of someone who knows how to make one or all of these into visualizations for the audio portal. We need some more visuals for in there and this would work perfectly in with the batch i think.=3

[Alice is Dead - Ep 1]

Interesting

Very sort of morbid. Kind of like the way it was told, making it look like we where just some other person that had fallen through the rabbit hole. The only real thing i can say is that it's a bit short. Maybe put more content in the next one possibly, though knowing how much time it takes to program and draw out stuff, i wouldn't mind the next parts short if we get to see them soon. =3

[E-player]

Interesting

Needs more interactivity. But this is a nice little idea, needs more different instruments and sounds to the instruments. but interesting.

[Nano Shock]

Eh.....

Well... reminded me of a game of pool where you control the balls. Nothing truly special, but not terrible. Just keep working on stuff, and you'll do just fine. =3

[GOBTRON]

One f the best so far

{::WARNING POSSIBLE SPOILER::}

I haven't been on the site for very long yet, but this is grade A quality,cream of the crop, um... any other "This is great" cliché you can think up this is it. This is a complement mind you. I liked that you had to sort of guess where you had to aim, it added a bit more difficulty to it, though it was easy to learn the aiming for it with a little time. Sadly i got through it in one sitting, i think around 2 hours. And for a flash game (if it is that), that is a lot of content. The added weapons where nice and helped add that much more variety to it. I would have liked to see more bosses throughout. I liked that you kept some of the things hidden (Such as the fart bomb, Boss level, and last level ups).
If you plan on making a sequel,make it so that the second time through there is a distinct difference in the gameplay, make it have more levels, bosses, powers, differences in the power-ups (Like different looking boogers and such), hidden levels and powers, and maybe eve *gasp* a two player mode!! -A hole busts through the space time continuum!-
ANYWAY, that may be asking to much (WAAY TO MUCH), but i hope to see more quality like this.
I didn't even touch the sound quality, it's nice, silly, simple and works, would like to hear more variety in the sounds and musacs too. =3
GOOD LUCK!!!!!

[Falldown!]

Simple, but nice

To be honest, this sprufed up game of Falldown. But it need's a bit more variety, more things to do rather than just Arrow this way <<-- and arrow this way -->>, and arrow up ^. So you know, fun until you lose, then the novelty wears off fast. Sorry to be the bearer of bad news, but be ready for some "THIS GAME SUCKS!!" reviews, by all of the absolute brilliant dumbasses that prowell newgrounds just to be asses. So be glad i was nice =3

shnitzel responds:

I'm happy to take harsh criticism. Even if it doesn't detail what makes it suck, just knowing what percentage of people disliked it helps me improve (since they most likely thought it sucked because of the same problems other people mentioned).

Thanks :)

[Stunt Bike Draw]

You guys are whiners

I didn't know that the newgrounds members where full of whiners and people who can't even follow simple instructions. I give all of the reviews below this a -10/10 for being stupid and not knowing how to read. This game has problems, that great, but you should give better description of what the problems are than "Worst game on newgrounds". I am truly surprised the dipshits who don't know how to give constructive criticism (It even asks for it before you post, that's what the words below the "Characters remaining say dumbasses). I had fun, was hard to do hardly anything, but it takes problem solving skills and a little patience to get by. (of which most of you apparently have none.) I hope that any sequels that do come out, fix some of the bugs, and make the ramp drawing a bit less idiot proof. Sorry that this may sound mean, but come on guys, take at least 5 seconds longer to think out your reviews.