Kirbyfemur's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Yings Unfinished Business]

Good, but...

I have to dock points for unfinishedness. Call me a dick if you want but this is how i feel.

The case for all of them, are they cut out just before both story structure could build, and characters could be established. The sound was good, but again the unfinished factor.

The lizard and fish song reminded me of "Pinky and Brain", probably because of the chords lol

The "This is love" thing was nice, but when they disappeared, it was hard to tell if it was from the lightning or something else.

And I'm sorry to hear about that friend and the logo thing.

Anyways, i'll be happily awaiting if even any of these get finished. Any one of them would be awesome from what i can see. =3

-Review Request Club

Ying-yong responds:

Horrible dick, thank you very much for the review :]

[The Creep]

Not terrible...

But it was far to inconsistent visually.

Yes, the visuals where good, smooth and such, but the people continuously changed in the way they looked, like every few seconds lol

This is especially prevalent in the guy that had his face peeled off. He would go from having a jawline, to none, to having a random hole in his face. Then the jaw would reappeared near the very end for the close up.

And even stranger, is if you look closely to the guy with the shotgun when the camera goes in for a close up before he dies, there is a hole by his eyebrow, and you can see the background moving behind him.

Also, in the beginning, when the hand ripped a part of the tombstone off, why did it reappear when the title went away and the hand stared running?

I'm sorry for being so critical, but these are some of this things i noticed, and i want to help you out as much as i can, because this could actually be a really good one. =3

-Review Request Club

[magic trouble]

Ah memories

Reminds me of a rocky and bulwinkle cartoon, i mean when he tries to pull a rabbit from his hat that is.

shaheen92 responds:

Glad to hear that it brought back memories for you.

[Half-Assed Parody Chap 8]

Thank you!

I realize this probably isn' technically a movie, but damn it it's funny. I just hope you don't get a bunch of whiny ass Potter fangirls (and guys) beating you repeatedly over the head with a hammer for making fun of their poor potty wotty.
ANYWAYS loved it =3

Sketchington responds:

Those folks know better than to listen to parodies. They've been burned before by asshats like me.

[The Future Wasn't There]

Hmmm....

well i liked how it flowed. It told a story without the use of words, like one of those old black and white silent films.

But i can't tell, it looked like he esploded or went back in time. I can't tell. Though what a messed up twist that would be if he just exploded and it ends there lol.

But i liked it. =3

spanio responds:

The ambiguity is intentional. I wanted people to be able to interpret the ending however they wanted. Traveling through time is a metaphor in this story anyway, so showing the actual act take place (I think) would ruin that.
Thanks for watching!