Liked it but..

There is a random high pitched noise that seems to happen every once and a while, and it is rather piercing...

THANK YOU!!

I laughed at the audio when i first heard it in the Audio Portal, and i'm still laughing now. My only real gripe would be that the music wasn't "Original" in the sense that you made it or that someone else made it here on newgrounds. But other then that it fit perfect. I would suggest bringing the volume down a smidge at the climax(s) of the song. Mainly to even things out, since it did get a little hard to hear the voice.

:3

Woo!

It's weren't to bad for a year old script. Though it does have it's issues here and there. You had a nice use of music (Trying not to sound biased since you did use my song lol), and the animation was pretty smooth for the most part, and will just need practice to get it better.

I think that you have a lot of potential to make some really great flashes, and hey you've already been apart of a flash that got front paged, so you've got exposure already, lucky you!!!

I would love to work with you again as far as providing musics go if you want. I mean that song didn't jump up in veiws or reviews, but it's still nice ya know? =3

Woot! This was fun workin with you guys :3

Not the best...

But has potential i suppose. The Music doesn't loop. And there should be some visual indicator of if the ball is moving, rather than just the platform moving under it. Also maybe some sore of level indicator as well. Just a general graphis overhaul would do this a great deal.

Tis Pretty good

My last review got removed due to a technical issue.

With the music, it is now muuuuuchly better :3

It's always fun make these sort of goofy and fun tracks. Love the dissonant qualities of the instruments. Everything seems to flow along with each other nicely. Rhythmically it's also quite fun as well.

I guess the only thing i could think that might improve upon this would be to expand upon some of the ideas that you have throughout the piece, even if only a little

The feedback sound weirdly cuts away, might need some tweaking.

Little mixing here and there with the individual instruments to help bring them out will help too, but so far shit's damn good. Can't wait to hear it as you work/finish it :3

What did you use to make this? The sounds are nice and clear, but the percussion seems a little out of it. And there is a bit of flat/emtyness at points.

Otherwise a rather nice little happy tune :3

Ah cubicle dexter

How i loved your movie, so sad that your younger self had to go.

I like how you used the borderless style. Makes me think of some sort of Samurai Jack - Dexters Lab cross-over possibility :3

Hmmmm....

Well there are a few things i wonder about this:

1) Is the ship design inspired by starfox? Because it sounds an aweful like that to me.

2) What program are you using to get 3D effects?

And here are a few pointers:

1) There needs to be a bit more detail work in the wings. Give them more of a fly-able look.

2) Maybe smooth off the edges of it just ever so slightly, but don't make it look spherical(if this makes sense)

3) Use a bit more color overall.

4)More general detail. Give it some aesthetic charm.

Anyways it wasn't too bad. =3

-Review Request Club