Kirbyfemur's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Drug the mouse]

Well...

I've already seem a similar game to this one, though this one is a bit different with the rat and all.

The graphics, aren't that good, the only actual movements are the rat and the dropping pills. The rat doesn't make any sort of walking animation, and just sort of slides around. At least give the rat some sort of movement.

The controls where just plain bad. Sorry, but it's true... The rat moves, yes, but when you press the button quickly, the rat just keeps moving, even if you didn't hold down the button.

The instructions should be given as your playing rather than in a separate section, since no one really will look at a "how to" section of a side scrolling collection game.

The music is a little bit lower quality and is a little icky at times as far as the sound.

Other than those, there really isn't much else to say other than i'm sorry if i have hurted your feelings.

MonoFlauta responds:

Oks thanks for telling me the problems :P they will be usefull
Thanks for reviewing!

[Tuper Tario Tros.]

Very well made

But a few things that could be nice to add, maybe in a next version or update:
1.) More Levels- Though i know it would be kind of hard to add variety to this, but maybe add some sort of upgrade ability.

2.) A drop down button for the tetris- This could just be something that could be turned on or off in an options menu. This would only be so it would make it easier for some lol

3.) Boss battles- This would probably be the hardest thing to add. But some how making it so that te boss would have a similar ability to use tetris blocks, and somehow incoperate both styles to have to defeat the boss.

I don't know, just some thoughts. I enjoyed it. =3

SwingSwing responds:

Thanks a lot !
If we make a "sequel" to TTT, we'll think about these improvements :)

[Bubble Blitz]

Interesing

It's a good idea and a challenge.

Only a couple of thing that i can think of:

1) Since there seems to be very little difference in hitting a wall and a spiked area, i Would make it so the walls all have a slightly rougher looking edge to them to give them a more ominous look.

2) The pipes that blow air came into the game without real warning. That mght be something to mention. Or say that there are other things to look out for. I don't know.

3) I'm having some troubles with the difficulty of the challenge levels, but that might just be me lol

Anywho it isn't to bad. =3

-Review Request Club

MrRandomist responds:

OK thanks for the review!
ill keep those things in mind

[:The Dot Game:]

Few notes for ya! =)

Here are some problems i found in individual levels.

Level 5: you can just jump to the right straight into the portal.

Level 6: Similar to 5, but you can just jump left into the portal. But it may cause problems for the next level once it loads.

Level 7: If you had jumped left into the portal you might glitch through the floor and respawn fall. meaning, you'll go through the floor hit the part where it restarts you but you glitch through the floor still. Sometimes it will stop, but be careful. But there is also the problem where if you jump between some of the spikes, you'll fall through the floor.

Level 8: Don't understand both the steroid comment (ince it wouldn't realy make you jump very high) nor the whole fall through the floor thing if you do jump. It is especially bad when you jump buy the portal and fall through the floor, because you don't respawn.

Level 9: Lol, if you go right, and jump off the edge of "Pacman" you'll either fall forever, or just be transported to the next level.

Level 12: It would seem, at least for me that everytime it loads, you start out respawning.

Level 13: If for whatever reason you don't get into the portal at first, you can go off the left edge and fall forever.

Some of the glitches I found would probably only have been found if someone was being an idiot, or was searching for them, like me lol

Anyways, since there have been a couple of reviews of "Better are and other stuff shit" I thought i would try to give you something more. Hope it helps! =3

-Review Request Club

Joshsouza responds:

Yeah thanks, sorry for the library of bugs!

[Falldown!]

Simple, but nice

To be honest, this sprufed up game of Falldown. But it need's a bit more variety, more things to do rather than just Arrow this way <<-- and arrow this way -->>, and arrow up ^. So you know, fun until you lose, then the novelty wears off fast. Sorry to be the bearer of bad news, but be ready for some "THIS GAME SUCKS!!" reviews, by all of the absolute brilliant dumbasses that prowell newgrounds just to be asses. So be glad i was nice =3

shnitzel responds:

I'm happy to take harsh criticism. Even if it doesn't detail what makes it suck, just knowing what percentage of people disliked it helps me improve (since they most likely thought it sucked because of the same problems other people mentioned).

Thanks :)

[The Awakening RPG Demo]

A very good start

Even though the Amnesia plot has been beaten to death, it should work for now. The combat system is nice, but i see a problem, when you might try to heal, getting to the button takes to long, you don't have enough time to even think about healing, though that adds a bit of difficulty possibly. Sadly i can;t hear the sounds because my dinky laptops sound driver seems to have stopped working somehow.
The Slash animation is a little sketchy, but like i said, this is a good start, and i probably took you a bit of time to code and draw. But i'd say before you send it out, work on the detail work on the characters, and find someway to reduce the slowdown. Tis a big project i foresee, so good luck and i'll be waiting to test out the next part of this you put out. =3

RockLou responds:

I will be working on everything! Thanks for the review!