It's always fun make these sort of goofy and fun tracks. Love the dissonant qualities of the instruments. Everything seems to flow along with each other nicely. Rhythmically it's also quite fun as well.
I guess the only thing i could think that might improve upon this would be to expand upon some of the ideas that you have throughout the piece, even if only a little
The feedback sound weirdly cuts away, might need some tweaking.
Little mixing here and there with the individual instruments to help bring them out will help too, but so far shit's damn good. Can't wait to hear it as you work/finish it :3
Cheers man. I'll take care of issues for the final version. This hasn't received my signature attention yet.. Just an idea. Thanks again, man!
What did you use to make this? The sounds are nice and clear, but the percussion seems a little out of it. And there is a bit of flat/emtyness at points.
Otherwise a rather nice little happy tune :3
This almost sounds...
broken in a way. But it's nice and calming for sure. But i would deck anyone who says this isn't any good.
Keep up the good work!
That's probably the pizzicato you're hearing that sounds "broken"... that's the most likely candidate in my opionion. Thanks for the review!
Mixing needs work....
The bass and the main synth seem to kind of be going back and forth as far as who is louder, and it's a bit to distracting for a listener. Make things a bit more even, maybe bring the synth and bass down a little and eq it so that the sounds mesh together rather than clash and cancel each other out.
More ambient than...
Classic rock. But it's very sort of spacy sounding. It could also use a bit of a content and variety boost due to the short length of the track.
It either needs....
More cowbell, or to be longer since the intro takes up about half of the song, the actual song part should be at least twice as long as the intro, cause not enough happens. It has a great beginning, but just sort of turns bland because of the lack of variety and content.
To short with the build-up
And i know you probably don't want to continue it from what i see in the other review. But i just wanted to give a short review on this, since i found this at random. So here is the actual "Review":
It's very calming, though maybe a little to quiet at the beginning, i know it was the effect you where going for, but maybe bringing it out a bit more would be nice. Also it could use a bit more of a dynamic boost when the main part comes in.
Drums.. aahhh...
You need to mess with the velocities big time on the drums, they sound to robotic. Also mess with the mix a bit more, cause the splash cymbols are far to harsh sounding on the ears. Actually all of the hi-hat and cybol parts need to be looked at, cause they are to ear peircing, and not in a good way.
It otherwise sounds great, just hard to listen to with the drums.
Not bad
But the song feels a bit hollow. There are some nice things going on. But it's missing something, it may be some bass and something in the mids as far as an eq thing goes. That and maybe mess around with the velocity's of your instruments, especially the drums, they sound a bit to robotic.
Some of the instruments could be brought out a bit more. Just do some messing, and this could be pretty good.
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